Sunday, 4 May 2014

Your director's Commentary is good but  you've still not added pics to Q7.

Q6 is far too brief, you need more evaluation on how the different techs helped you accomplish your plans & FAR more about editing processes in Pinnacle.


Q5. There's some useful info here BUT you still don't have ANY audience feedback. You need to say what people thought of your production, did they recognise it as a thriller and if so how/why. Did they understand what was going on & would they want to watch it to find out what happens? What did they think was best about it & what needed improving?

You have all the 'required' planning Hannah but don't have any reflection on your shoot or discussion of choices such as music, production logo, titles etc. This would improve your blog & grade.